Response to Example Essay

This essay, for me was a little easier than the descriptive essay. I didn't have as hard of a time starting this essay than the last one. If I had to give advice to an upcoming English 1101 student; I would tell them to think of all their examples first and put them in an order that makes sense and then start to write their essay. I had the most comments about the order of my examples and that they needed to be in a little better order. After I went back and read it, I found that I really did need to go back and change the order of some of my paragraphs. I really did take and use the comments that I got on my blog and changed my paper to reflect them.
In reference to my blog and posting on it; I wasn't really too excited about it at first. Then when I started actually posting and receiving comments, it made it worth it. When I finally got my blog fixed and started receiving comments, they were good, helpful comments!